Your Stage : Writing Demo Reel Feedback by Tamara Green

Tamara Green

Writing Demo Reel Feedback

I recently paid a service to shoot and edit a demo reel for me, with me. In addition to acting in the scenes, I wrote the scenes (hoping to use the reel as a bit of a writing reel too). I have the option to retake a line here or there, so I am looking for some constructive criticism on the reel.

Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Tamara Green. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Screenwriting Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge since you posted the same thing in the Acting Lounge. Stage 32 doesn't want members posting the same thing in different discipline Lounges on the same day because it can clog up the Lounges and other members’ posts won’t be seen.

If you want to put a post in two discipline Lounges on the same day, change one of the posts significantly. Or you can put one post in a Lounge one day and put the same post in another Lounge on a different day.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Tamara Green

Ok, thanks Maurice Vaughan good to know.

Tamara Green

Maurice Vaughan what exactly is "my stage lounge" and who sees what is there?

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Tamara Green. I tried to think of some constructive criticism for your reel, but you did an incredible job, and the reel ends strong.

The Your Stage Lounge is a place for members to post promotion, updates on projects, success stories that aren't related to Stage 32 (Stage 32 success stories can go in the Stage 32 Success Stories Lounge), and so on. Anyone who's in your network and anyone who's subscribed to the Lounge can see your posts.

Tamara Green

Thank you Maurice Vaughan for the kind words and for explaining the Your Stage Lounge to me.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Tamara Green. Your other post is still in the Acting Lounge. The post I moved is from the Screenwriting Lounge.

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