Your Stage : The Occam's Razor of Pitches by Holly Fouche

Holly Fouche

The Occam's Razor of Pitches

Finally found the simplest way to pitch my series lol:

A group of teens rescue robots with human souls.

Took a billion logline attempts, but hey, I made it.

CJ Walley

Good for you and well done, Holly. You put the work in, got a result, and built a creative muscle that will eventually do this instinctively.

Maurice Vaughan

Congratulations, Holly Fouche! I like that pitch! If I was a producer, I'd request your script.

I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Screenwriting Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge. The Your Stage Lounge is a space where members can share updates on projects. If your update mentions a service you used on Stage 32, it's an update for a Stage 32 event, your post starts a conversation that’s helpful/educational to the community (like giving advice or asking a question), or you're asking for feedback on something, you can put it in one of the discipline Lounges. Let me know if you have any questions.

Holly Fouche

lol whoops! Sorry Maurice Vaughan lol wasn't sure where to post it

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