They're my favorite ones to type.
And I just did.
Join me in a booty dance, y'all.
SHIFT is done! We have a first draft. It is drafted.
Woohoo!!
Your Stage : Those Two Little Words by Elle Bolan
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4 months ago
Those Two Little Words
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Congratulations, Elle Bolan! "Those Two Little Words." Movie/show title. Are you going to let your script rest or jump into the rewrites?
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I'll do a trim pass where I cut repetition or any fluff that snuck in. Then I'll let it rest for a few days. Clarity pass. More rest. Visual pass. Etc. and thanks! I feel like it took me forever to write this movie.
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You mean "THOSE TWO LOVE BIRDS" who always go with one another. Congratulations Elle Bolan
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You're welcome, Elle Bolan. I like that process. I try to let a script rest after finishing the first draft, but sometimes I'm so excited to start the rewrites or I'm on a deadline.
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Maurice Vaughan the temptation of letting your scrip rest or jumping back into some rewrites is real.
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I'd rather let the script rest, Roberto Micheletti. And I like posting pages on social media. I catch story issues and typos that way sometimes. Do you do that?
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Congratulations! (doing the booty dance shouting hooray j your honor)
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Thanks @Roberto - two love birds indeed. Match meant to be!
Thanks hon.
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Bram Christian your happy dance is appreciated!
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What is Shift about?
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@Kevin Hager - well, it's about violence, in a sense. Particularly, it's about people who develop a violent streak and how they each learn to contain it.
Potential logline: When a traumatic night brings five damaged lives into orbit, an amateur boxer becomes a reluctant ground for people struggling to reign in the violence they were never taught how to live with.
I'm not very happy with that logline as it sits. But it's a work in progress.
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Well do your best. Maybe it can also involve redemption.
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I longggggg to type that . Well done Elle Bolan
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I am genuinely happy for you, all my best wishes.
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Congrats on the first draft! Always a good feeling. Best with the rest!
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Maurice Vaughan no. i haven't posted mine on social media. I also never used to like going through mine before, but now i have actually disciplined myself to check it over again just incase of typos.
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Cue the Flashdance theme song....What A Feeling!!!!
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Congratulations—this is such a beautiful moment. Enjoy the momentum. I wish you the best of luck in your pitch session. Make the dream come true.
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Thanks y'all!