Hello. I'm currently writing a script, but I have no one to discuss it with. Anyone who can read it? Please give me a review.
In a nutshell, it's a series set in the 90s. Teenagers are all having their own problems, and one evening they stumble upon a genie who grants their wishes. But when everyone's wish is granted, the illusion is shattered. (Note: I don't speak English well, so there may be spelling and logical errors. Sorry.)
Here's a link to the full pilot episode.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qHHm9OYLxEqKob0kq302KvFWaAxp6EpOmQWU...
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Hi Ivan, welcome to Stage 32.
Your concept sounds intriguing—especially the mix of coming-of-age themes with a supernatural catalyst that disrupts everyone’s reality.
I may not be able to read the full script immediately, but I’d be happy to take a look at a few pages or discuss the idea and structure if that helps. Wishing you the best with the project.
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I suggest using a photo of yourself as your profile picture. People will feel more comfortable networking and collaborating with you if they know what you look like. You can upload a picture by clicking the gear symbol in the top right-hand corner and selecting “Edit profile” in the drop-down menu, then clicking the red button underneath your location and choosing "Update profile picture."
You could post your script on your profile. Other members can read your script and give feedback on it, and producers search profiles for projects. That and networking are how I sold four short scripts to a producer. Click the gear symbol in the top right-hand corner and select “Edit profile” in the drop-down menu. Scroll down to “Loglines” and click “Add/edit loglines” to the right of “Loglines.” You can also post your script on your profile this way: www.stage32.com/loglines (near the top where it says “Add a Logline”)
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Hi Ivan - welcome to Stage 32, I believe you will have a great experience here.
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Ivan - It shows promise, but you need to fix a few things.
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I might invite you to two places here through stage 32 to discuss it: MONDAY COVERAGE REPORT AND THURSDAY PITCH PRACTICE with John and Nicole. Both places analyze scripts, pitches and stories of yours and other writers. It will give you a good idea of structure. Even if you are a writer already it will put you in the mix with others. Try it out!!
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Hi everyone, I'm Burundian (a refugee in Mozambique). I love to read, and now I've started writing I already have two books despite my limited time.And I've written a short film and I'd like opinions but I don't know how!! Thank you very much
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That sounds interesting and has some Stranger Things vibes.
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Work on the script, worry about pitching later.
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Hi, Mujos Léandre. Welcome to the community. Congratulations on writing two books and a short script!
You could post your short script on your profile. Members can give feedback on your script, and producers search profiles for projects. That and networking are how I sold four short scripts to a producer. Click the gear symbol in the top right-hand corner and select “Edit profile” in the drop-down menu. Scroll down to “Loglines” and click “Add/edit loglines” to the right of “Loglines.”
You can also post your script on your profile here: www.stage32.com/loglines (near the top where it says “Add a Logline”)
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We go over new scripts every week on my YouTube channel. Let me know if you want us to look at yours.