Hi everyone
I’m currently working in a mystery / coming of age series Pilot called Blackwood and I’m looking for honest Feedback.
The Story follows a group of teenagers in a small forest town where a Boy dissapears after Hearing a Strange hum/ Sound in the woods. As they search for him, they uncover traces If a Hidden government Experiment connected to the phenomenon and the town itself.
I’d especially appreciate Feedback in pacing, Dialogue and Overall structure.
The Script ist around 30 Pages and still in development.
Happy to Exchange Feedback aswell.
Feel free to connect for the full Script Exchange.
Scary! Sounds amazing!