Hello everyone would love to get your thoughts on the logline.
Title: The Audition
A daughter who spent twelve years planning her revenge infiltrates the world of the producer who destroyed her father — by using the one man who owed him a debt.
Screenwriting : Logline feedback by Shazz K
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Shazz K Sounds interesting but its missing some elements of a logline. I don't know the whole story but thought from what I read, I thought this might be a little more revealing: "Twelve years after a ruthless Hollywood producer destroyed her father, his daughter infiltrates the mogul’s inner circle by manipulating the one powerful man who still owes her family a life debt."
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Wow, this is an impressive project! I love the concept and the creativity behind it it’s clear you’ve put a lot of thought into the story and characters. I specialize in [scriptwriting / story development / editing / production planning], and I’d love to explore how I could contribute to bringing this vision to life.
If you’re open to it, I’d be happy to discuss ideas or collaborate on taking this project even further feel free to reach out!
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Only because I'm a singer/songwriter and screenwriter, my first question was; what kind of producer was he? A music producer, a movie producer, producer in economics? By being more specific it gives the reader an idea of what kind of world she's infiltrating. Cheers.