Screenwriting : Writing my first feature, and looking for input on the first 16 pages by David George Sears

David George Sears

Writing my first feature, and looking for input on the first 16 pages

https://www.stage32.com/profile/173838/Screenplay/The-Guide-Horrible-wor... It's my first feature, and so far, I feel like I'm doing a pretty good job. I'd like some other opinions though.

Jeremy Thornhill

Hey David. Is this your first attempt ever at writing a screenplay?

Carole A. Parker

Too soon. Can't critique a fragment. Get the first draft done. I

Danny Manus

I offer a first act service, but that's the first 30 pages or so.

David George Sears

It's my first feature, but not my first screenplay.

Jeremy Thornhill

I think you should read a few more professional screenplays that have been made the past 5 years as well. In your genre. Because there are a lot of formatting issues as well.

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