Introduce Yourself : New to Stage32 by Joe Bitonti

Joe Bitonti

New to Stage32

Hello all, I'm new to the site and just getting the hang of navigating it. I'm a screenwriter who loves Fantasy, SciFi, Adventure. A big fan of Twilight Zone, X-Files, Fringe and the idea that there is just so much out there that we don't understand. I've posted some loglines on my profile for anyone interested in taking a look.

Joe Bitonti

Hello Alle, thank you for the comments. Log lines come easily to some, like breathing. I will rework them to convey the story more succinctly.

Joe Bitonti

I reworked all but one logline, still thinking about it. Hopefully they give a clearer picture.

Joe Bitonti

Thanks for the comments Brian. All valid points and it's good to have others critique them.

Oriel Kerr

Welcome Joe and thanks for your critique on my logline. I read through yours and you have some compelling ideas for stories. I do agree with the advice Brian gave to hone, your logline. I wish you the best going forward and look forward to reading more from you!

Joe Bitonti

Thank you Oriel. Good luck with your script. It's an interesting twist on PTSD.

Amber Lucille Brown

Hi Joe, I share your love of SciFi. Nice to meet you. I am new here as well.

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