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SYNOPSIS:
ONOME is a jobless graduate who lives with her mum in a cupid apartment. She is hated by all in the compound especially KIKI a young slay queen, but children seem to like onome for reasons unknown. The caretaker on the other hand built resentment towards Onome and her mum. Onome dream of being wealthy finally comes to pass but she is consumed by pride and ruled by flesh. Her relationship with her love interest DOTUN is at the verge of a burning fire but pride couldn't make her see. Finally she had a confrontation with self, they engage in word battle as both claim to be the rightfully owner of the wealth. Onome wakes up to the realization that everything was just a dream. How much power does the spirit realm has control over the physical?
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Hello Ruth. Perhaps it would be a good idea to add a few things to your logline, for example, what's the decisive/critical event that changes the life of the protagonist (inciting incident), and a few words about the antagonistic forces that will try to stop the first class student from achieving his/her goals.
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Sure I will thanks
You're very welcome, Ruth!
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