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BY THE TIME WE DIE
By Clarence Sharpe
Six immortals drawn to one another are forced to tumble through time so they can piece together the mystery of their very existence. All the while they're being hunted down by an unusual serial killer whose singular purpose is to keep them in the dark.
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Hello Clarence. The concept of your story is super intriguing, not to mention original. Here, just a humble suggestion for the logline, in order to make it shorter: "Six immortals drawn to one another have to tumble through time to piece together the mystery of their very existence while hunted down by an unusual serial killer whose singular purpose is to keep them in the dark." All further details can be written in the synopsis.
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Marcos Fizzotti I like that! Thank you very much and thank you for the support!
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You're welcome, Clarence.
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That's one helluva run-on sentence - I need an oxygen mask after reading that aloud.
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B A Mason Noted! I'll break that up. Thanks for the feedback!
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Sounds like a terrific crucible of intensity!
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