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IN THE BLOOD
By Shaun St. Cyr
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This sounds like something I'd definitely watch, Shaun St. Cyr. It's kind of like a music version of "Fighting with My Family."
Here's a couple of suggestions for your logline:
#1) Add a comma after "talented."
#2) Explain what "before it’s too late" means.
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