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Love is both the cause and the weapon of the crime. And no one is guilty. A mountain road. Dawn. A hauler and his two oxen pull a wooden cart along a narrow path descending toward a remote fishing village, shrouded in mist and a light rain. At the roadside, the camera lingers on the damp ground: a column of fungus grower termite crosses the earth, advancing with mechanical determination toward the depths of the nest. On the road, children play, some pale, some thin, barely able to stand. They watch the cart pass without curiosity. This is normal. The hauler delivers his goods to the edge of the village. He never enters. He drops off what he has been asked to bring. He takes what he has been asked to bring back. Sometimes, under a tarpaulin, there are bodies. He ties them to stones at the edge of the cliff and throws them into the lake below. He doesn't ask why. The Emergence In the village, silence reigns. The villagers gather at the lake's edge. Something stirs beneath the surface. Slowly, a figure emerges. A woman. Her body is covered in beads that capture the first glimmer of dawn. She walks toward the shore without a word. The crowd parts. They stop before an old woman ravaged by illness. The beaded woman sticks out her tongue and, with her long, precise nails, severs it. A ritualistic, unavoidable gesture. A golden liquid flows into her palm. She touches the old woman's face, the wounds close, the skin comes alive again. The villagers fall to their knees. The Welcome The village welcomes her with genuine tenderness. They prepare a bed for her, the best meals. She recovers. She produces pearls that the villagers swallow like medicine. She vomits liquid gold, which the villagers carefully collect. The sick rise again. The children survive. It is pure love. Without calculation. On the road, the transporter notices that the children are now running toward his cart, laughing. He says nothing. He continues to throw the bodies of the most destitute into the lake, scattering petals on the water. The Dependence But the needs grow. For each sick child, more is demanded of her. For each epidemic, she is fed more heavily. Her body changes. Her breathing becomes shallow, her movements slow. The villagers see her agony, but they carry on. Not out of cruelty, but because their children are dying. Love and survival have become one and the same. She watches them with painful understanding. She knew from the beginning how this story would end. The Ritual. One morning, she produces nothing. Her body is exhausted. Panic sets in. The village gathers in cathedral-like silence. No one decides, there is no leader, just a long, heavy wait. The ceremony takes place at sunset. Spiritual dances, incense smoke. Two men lift the woman above their heads, a villager takes a knife, looks her straight in the eyes, his face impassive, and brandishes the blade, passing it beneath her and slicing through her abdomen. The villagers step forward one by one to collect the last drops of what remains. The healed dance, their faces bathed in tears and joy. This is not violence; it is a collective sacrifice. A few days later, the transporter returns, but today no one comes to greet him. He waits in front of the entrance and notices an unusual silence, so he decides to enter for the first time. He explores the deserted village; No one remains, only the buildings and vestiges of life. The man walks toward the lake and lingers, his gaze lost in the distance, as if dazed. At his feet, the lake water mingles with liquid gold, like oil in water. The ultimate revelation. Many years later. The village is abandoned, overgrown with tall grass. A group of young people wander through the ruins at night, a basket and a flashlight in hand, searching for mushrooms (Nấm Mối). One of them stops and picks a few; nearby, he finds a pearl in the grass. Captivated by its brilliance, he picks it up and holds it to his face, its radiant glow shining intensely, reflected in his eye. THE END. Where this film was born ? https://www.stage32.com/lounge/screenwriting/I-would-like-to-share-with-...
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Love it!
@Sydney S, Thank you so much :) !!
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Simply sublime as a concept, I can already imagine the whole film, a work that can leave its mark with its beauty and its horror, here is the next Midsommar Vietnamese !
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I like this concept a lot. Very asian. It feels like a dark fairy tale with a strong emotional core. What stayed with me is how love and survival slowly start to blur, without ever turning anyone into a clear “villain.” It makes everything more human… and more unsettling.
There’s something very haunting about the tone, especially the idea that this might have been inevitable from the start. And that final image with the pearl is simple but really powerful—it lingers.
I can definitely see this working beautifully on screen
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Wow! Interesting premise Minh Nguyen
Thank you very much, @Kevin Lenoble !
Thank, it's touching to hear @Leonardo Ramirez. :)
Hello @Pont Alex, and a huge thank you for such a thoughtful read and for your feedback, which means so much to me.
You've hit the nail on the head regarding the project. My intention was never to point the finger at classic "villains," but to explore that gray and terrifying area where the instinct for survival and love for one's own become destructive forces. Knowing that this moral ambiguity works for the reader and makes the story more unsettling is the greatest validation for me.
The idea of fate, of this inescapable myth where everything is predetermined, is exactly what I wanted to weave, from the very first sacrifice to that famous pearl forgotten in the tall grass at the end.
Your comment gives me incredible energy to continue championing this vision and bringing it to the screen. Thank you for immersing yourself in this world!
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Thank you ! @Robyn Henderson.
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Minh Koby, your writing is surgically economical. He uses silence as a character in its own right. The introduction of the Transporter, a neutral and mechanical figure, places us in the position of powerless observers. The horror here doesn't stem from an external threat, but from a toxic symbiosis. The village is a human termite mound devouring its host (the pearl woman) to ensure the survival of its larvae (the children).
The use of Nấm Mối (termite fungus) as a narrative engine is a feat of "High Concept." It's an organic horror unlike anything seen before, rooted in authentic Vietnamese culture.
The contrast between the golden liquid and the stone-weighted bodies creates an aesthetic of "Traumatic Beauty." It's pure sensory cinema (the texture of the pearls, the mist, the gold, the flesh).
The absence of a "villain" makes the story unbearable. The viewer is caught between empathy for the sacrificed mother and understanding the villagers' struggle for survival.
The final time jump is the script's stroke of genius. By showing these young people searching for mushrooms by flashlight and stumbling upon a forgotten pearl, Nguyen transforms his drama into an eternal cycle. The pearl becomes a dormant disease. Evil is not defeated; it simply awaits its next prey.
You have here one of the best projects on paper that I have honestly read, a true masterpiece on paper, but the harsh reality of filmmaking remains. However, with everything you've shown on your profile, and this sense of need for your story, I have no doubt that you will succeed in conveying all of this through the camera. I wish you every success with this film.
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Thank you so much @David Beneck, for your detailed feedback, it touches me to know that a reader can understand the film so well, and yes, in Vietnam the Nam Moi is a very prized mushroom, it is expensive and people love its taste, people get up very early in the morning to go treasure hunting, in Vietnam it is called After Rain Gold.
Thank you @Nate Rymer for taking the time to look into Pearl, it means a lot to me.
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Thank You, Josiah for you rating <3