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Abigail Selling doesn’t just feel out of place—he is. Loved briefly by many yet remembered by none, he drifts through life as a helpful ghost in the machine—present but forgotten, brilliant but unrewarded. At age 40, following an emotional collapse that medicine couldn’t explain, Abigail begins seeing fragments of something deeper. Then, the memories return. He remembers the impossible: before birth, he witnessed his future siblings—pure souls—preparing to incarnate into a broken world. The system would crush their innocence. The only solution? Become the glitch. With the blessing of one of the 24 Great Masters, Abigail forced his evolved soul into a life not meant for him. His unauthorized presence would protect the others—altering their paths subtly through love, chaos, and resonance. But the cost was erasure: isolation, pain, and the world rejecting him at every turn. Now, as memories flood back, Abigail must face what he is: a soul that broke spiritual law to save others. But to complete the mission, he must survive a world designed to erase him.
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Hi, @Eusebio. SACRED GLITCH is really unique!
I think your logline could be tightened up a little. Something like: After a magnetic yet chronically overlooked man has a spiritual breakdown at 40 and awakens buried memories, he realizes he was never meant to be born, but forced his soul into existence to protect innocent spirits from the corrupted cycle of incarnation.
Or something like this: After a magnetic yet chronically overlooked man has a spiritual breakdown at 40 and awakens buried memories, he realizes he was never meant to be born and sets out to accomplish his mission—protect innocent spirits from the corrupted cycle of incarnation.
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Yesss! much better like you say. Man, I appreciate a lot your help , i wasn’t able to even make a good Bio =) . But with your help , my entire profile is now corrected and nicely done . So THANK YOU .
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You're welcome, @Eusebio. Glad to help.
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