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Troy, a failed journalist thinks he has found his big break after discovering reporting of a monstrous creature, what he fails to realize is that this story might just break him.
SYNOPSIS:
Troy is a failing journalist who learns about a mysterious creature that is running around and eating almost anything in sight. While conducting interviews and investigating the story more he learns the real origins of the beast with an insatiable hunger.
I might work the logline into “Troy is a failed journalist who thinks he’s found his big break, but the story just might break him.” But it’s just a suggestion, i’m no log line pro.
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