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At Christmastime, a hopeless junkie is sent back to his high school glory days in the late eighties hoping to keep his impressionable, younger brother from following in his footsteps.
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I like this Sean Armstrong - short and on point. It's got a Back to the Future meets the Christmas Carol vibe. I'm not the best with loglines but could you identify the 'force' that sends him back? Great logline!
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Thank you David Hall! "Back to the Future" is in my top 5 favorite movies of all time, so I'm sure it creeps into a lot of what I write. I was definitely going for a "Back to the Future" meets "It's a Wonderful Life" vibe, but I think I landed in more of a John Hughes-territory. As for the force that sends him back, all I'll say is it isn't a time machine. But the scripts attached if you want to check it out...
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How do you post a screenplay?
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Fernando, when you add a new logline they give you the option of uploading a PDF too