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STANDBY
By Christopher Shank

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

A man on the verge of losing his father is forced into a state of constant waiting—balancing hospital calls, legal battles, and his own unraveling—while trying to hold his family, and himself, together. As he prepares for the inevitable, he learns that grief doesn’t begin with death—it begins the moment you realize life will never be the same.

SYNOPSIS:

When thirty-something Caleb Finch receives a 4 a.m. call that his estranged father is “slipping,” he and his longtime partner Grace immediately begin the overnight drive from Georgia to Southeast Missouri. They’ve both done this before: the frantic scramble, the pre-packed hospital bags, the frozen dread. For Caleb, the trip is less about arrival than survival — every mile dredges up the unresolved grief of losing his brother in Iraq, the trauma of his mother’s death years earlier, and the lifelong panic responses he never learned to unhook from his body.

When they reach the hospital, Caleb reunites with his older brother Conrad — volatile, deeply loyal, and equally damaged. Their father, Cal, lies sedated in Room 212, a frail echo of the man who raised them. The brothers fall immediately into old patterns: resentment, blame, dark humor, and the shared but unspoken fear of losing their last parent. Grace becomes the stabilizing force between them, doing the emotional labor no one asks for but everyone needs.

As visitors cycle through the room — church friends, coworkers, old family acquaintances — the hospital becomes a liminal world where time stretches and collapses. Caleb’s panic attacks spike under the fluorescent hum. Conrad spirals over the collapse of his own relationship. Grace retreats into the meditative ritual of making BTS freebies to stay grounded. And Lois, Cal’s born-again ex-wife, arrives to “pray him into heaven,” igniting theological and personal tensions that mirror the fractures already inside the family.

Between long bouts of waiting, Caleb is pulled into memories of his brother’s deployment, his mother’s agonizing final hours, and the years of anger that calcified between him and Cal. The past and present bleed together as Caleb realizes how much of his life has been shaped by unresolved grief — and how much he’s feared becoming the man in the hospital bed.

On the second night, Cal briefly stirs, offering no dramatic last words — just a flicker of consciousness that forces Caleb to decide what he needs to say, even without a response. He forgives his father aloud, not for Cal’s sake but for his own. It is imperfect, quiet, and real.

Hours later, the call comes: Cal is gone. The brothers and Grace return to the hospital in the middle of the night to face the stillness of the room without the hum of their father’s breathing. There is no grand reconciliation, no cinematic catharsis — only the fragile, human truth that grief begins long before death, and doesn’t resolve itself with a single moment.

In the end, Caleb steps out, exhausted but present — disappearing into himself, running from the life that remains. The world hasn’t gotten easier. But he has stopped waiting for the next loss to define him.

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