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By Eric Jeske

GENRE: Action, Thriller

After learning her son is still alive, a former cult member must return to her old life and pull him out before his developing telekinetic "gifts" are used as a weapon by the cult's charismatic leader.

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Mikey Lott

This is so fascinating! How dark would you take the story? It seems like it would either take a tone of The Master or Hereditary kind of quickly.

Eric Jeske

Thanks!! The story does go pretty dark in a few places. My writing partner and I really wanted to put our protagonist through the wringer and push her to see how far a mother would go to protect and save their child.

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