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LUCAS (SHORT)
By Divij Kak

GENRE: Sci-fi, Horror
LOGLINE:

Lucas,a half wolf and half man alien comes to Earth and mutates into an adult very quickly,who kills humans when he feels threatened.Will he be stopped or destroyed by Robert Morton and his team of scientists from Alien Life Force(A.L.F.) lab?

LUCAS (SHORT)

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James Drago

Is Lucas the protagonist? Doesn't sound like it. If he is, what does he face (obstacles)?

Brian Shell

Needs more adjectives that make each pop. What kind of alien species? What kind of adult? What group of humans?

Divij Kak

Rated this logline

Brian Shell

I'd replace "and kills" with "who kills." Next, telling me his proper name - Robert Morton - tells me nothing about who he really is as a protag. This reminds me of a reverse Logan

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