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A passionate May–December romance turns into a devastating family scandal when a long-buried adoption secret reveals her fiancé is her sister’s son.
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Riley Collins is finally ready to say yes — to love, to a second chance, to the much younger man who sees her for who she really is. But when her fiancé, Daniel, suffers a medical collapse and begins a desperate search for his birth family, a devastating truth is uncovered: he’s the biological son her older sister Marcia gave up decades ago. As the past unravels and family secrets come to light, Riley must face the impossible — walk away from the man she loves or risk tearing her family apart forever. Emotionally gripping and packed with twists, Escape to Rio is a tangled, heart-wrenching journey about forbidden love, second chances, and the complicated truth about what makes a family.
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Sounds intriguing, Cheryl Rae. I've never heard the term "May–December romance" (I just looked it up), and that's a shocking secret! Your logline is just the setup. I suggest adding the protagonist's goal and the stakes.
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