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REPENT

REPENT
By Ryan L. Jones

GENRE: Horror, Thriller / Suspense
LOGLINE:

Two officers fight to survive a night patrol of betrayal, violence and torment when they get trapped in a house with a dark force that's beyond anything they were trained to handle.

Maurice Vaughan

Unique concept, Ryan L. Jones! I think your logline needs a better flow. Something like "*Two officers fight to survive a night patrol of betrayal, violence and torment when they get trapped in a house with a dark force that's beyond anything they were trained to handle.*"

Ryan L. Jones

Thanks Maurice Vaughan I agree. That's a great improvement. Much appreciated!

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Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Ryan L. Jones.

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