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Jesus, the Savior of the world, and his army of warrior angels struggle against his Father’s will for mankind and the responsibility of saving humanity again from an eternal enemy, Lucifer, and his own demon army in the New World.
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2 out of 5 stars. Missing the hook to make readers want to know more about your story. Why would Jesus go against his Father? Does that mean he would join with Lucifer?