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DEADMAN
By Patrick Gatov

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense, Science Fiction
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After a small town is rocked by a series of inexplicable events, a resourceful sheriff pursues an enigmatic stranger with no memory who may hold the key to the truth behind the chaos.

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Maurice Vaughan

This sounds like it's gonna be exciting and suspenseful, Patrick Gatov!

I think your logline only needs a little work.

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Patrick Gatov

Thank you, Maurice! I appreciate the feedback.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Patrick Gatov.

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