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When young spy Quentin and his friends uncover a rogue terrorist cell at the mystical Loch of Arthur, they must decode ancient secrets and embrace their destiny to thwart a sinister plot that could change the fate of the realm forever.
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Tagline: “In a world of legends, the bravest knights are the ones who dare to believe.”
Twelve-year-old Quentin isn’t your typical summer camper—especially not when he's recruited by Captain Unwin Macpherson to join a secret team of young spies. Their mission? Uncover the truth behind ION, a shadowy terrorist group operating near the mysterious Loch of Arthur.
What begins as a thrilling investigation soon unravels into something far older and stranger. Beneath the surface of the loch, Quentin discovers a forgotten diary, a hidden Moon Code, and the lost secrets of King Arthur himself.
As danger closes in and armed enemies close the net, Quentin must step up—not just as a spy, but as a new kind of knight. With his friends by his side, he races to unlock the past, stop ION’s deadly plan, and protect a magical legacy that could change their world forever.
An action-packed family adventure filled with myth, mystery, and courage—for readers who believe the old legends might still live.
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Simon Hartwell, the phrase “Loch of Arthur” hints at Arthurian lore, which adds a rich layer of mythology. However, it could benefit from more clarity on tone and target audience. Is this a young adult fantasy, a family adventure, or something darker? You might also consider simplifying the structure slightly and giving us a clearer sense of Quentin’s personal arc or what makes him essential to stopping the plot. There’s a lot of promise here with a bit more focus.
Ashley Renee Smith Thanks for the feedback Ashley. I have amended the Synopsis, inclusive of your notes. Very much appreciated.
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