A young actress scores a coveted role in a sexy new drama but struggles to keep her life and career on track when her co-star turns out to be the A-List biological father she never met.
This one is really good, and a lot more specific, but we need the move into act two and/or the stakes. You've got the intro and the inciting incident (discovering her co-star is her father) but what's she up against or after following this. What will now drive the story forward?
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This one is really good, and a lot more specific, but we need the move into act two and/or the stakes. You've got the intro and the inciting incident (discovering her co-star is her father) but what's she up against or after following this. What will now drive the story forward?
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