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TOP SECRET INGREDIENTS
By Pablo Diablo
The newly-founded CIA hunts down the KGB in the wake of the Cold War with their most trusted spy: Julia Child.
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Thanks Brad for the pitch to change up the logline!
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Love the idea, but the logline feels jumbled though. How about:
The newly-founded CIA hunts down the KGB in the wake of the Cold War with their most trusted spy: Julia Child.
I like that pitch! It certainly reads better! Thanks Brad!