Peter Goldfinger: Producer and screenwriter in Los Angeles, California.

Pamela Jaye Smith

And, interesting comments and Q+A on Peter's article. // My own brush with horror films was being hired once to rewrite a horror script. Managed to write in a Halloween party which offered lots of fun opportunities in the costumes and disguises. // Then I was brought on as a Consultant on as a Story...

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Maurice Vaughan

Great advice, Peter! “There are so many genius horror movies that take place in a house or a hotel or in the woods. Why? Because you only need one location.” A house is my default location choice when I outline a script. Sometimes it takes creativity to figure out an interesting story that takes place in a house though.

Maurice Vaughan

Great tip, Suzanne. A regular house is my default location choice when I outline because it's one of the cheapest options.

Pamela Jaye Smith

And to borrow from a creature-horror type film..."We're gonna need a bigger house".

Maurice Vaughan

Haha Pamela

Tom Stohlgren

Just planning a horror script. Your blog was "blood-spot-on" and well-timed. Thanks, Tom

Pamela Jaye Smith

Good luck with your horror script, Tom. Given your comment on the blog, I'll be there'll be at least some humor in your story.

Pamela Jaye Smith

What impressive accomplishments, Peter. Good for you! And thanks for passing along your experienced observations. Wishing you all good fortune in your creative projects.

Ebai-Eyong Akanga

I was writing a horror movie, and honestly, I had a lot of second thoughts on if I should incorporate a dramatic subplot and a subgenre. This lesson has clarified a lot. I think I aligned with most of what was said here in the script I'm presently working on.

Tony Ray

I've honestly been thinking about this article all day. So, when it comes to zombies being played out (and I believe another commenter mentioned vampires and werewolves as well) my ever-hopeful self says, "Nay, nay!". I think that they can still be done well, but the problem is how they've been shot...

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Ashley Renee Smith

Love these tips, Peter! Thank you for sharing!

Bill Brock

Thank you, Peter. This was a very thought-provoking article. I wrote a horror feature called HORROR-FEST. My "Final Girl" dies at the end.... moments after killing the serial killer. Decided to go "Full-Blown Unconventional." Your thoughts? Happy Way-Way-Way Early Halloween!

Samuel Lebow

Personally, I think the idea works. It's happened before in horror films (not often, but sometimes). The best solution is to also write a back up ending, though, in case any studios give a note about that.

Dean Hodsfry

Great article Brian! As a budding horror writer what would your advice be for a body part collector?

Samuel Lebow

Thank you for this writing. I've still been trying to figure out some low budget concepts, so that advice will help. Also, definitely onboard with the Zombies played out. They're on my list along with vampires and werewolves (though I ironically have a vampire script, but I'm playing it up as more o...

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Samuel Lebow

Just clearing up what I'm saying about the opening minutes and not going dark in the characters' mindsets. I mean, you don't necessarily want the main characters to start off entirely emotionally scar...

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Wendy Kay

Thank you, Peter

Thank you for reminding me of Chad Vader!

It seems the online content which has been the most successful has been comedy. What would you say would be the best genres for someone who does not write comedy (yet)?

Peter Goldfinger

This is SUCH a good question. And you are right that mostly all that's landing is comedy. As such, we are trying to make our horror series we're writing with more camp. I think my best advice would be...

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Mike W. Rogers

Thank you for your response, Peter!

I keep trying to simplify my sci-fi and horror stories to a one punch "joke" in the form of a scare or something eerie but I am still running a bit long for digital format, so I am looking forward to the rest of the series!!

Aaron Hawkins

I love writing horror! Great information in this blog. Is it a dealbreaker to not have an opening kill?

Lisa Vandiver

Great information. I have a story I'm toying with between Dark Fantasy and Horror. In your opinion, what're the differences between Dark Fantasy and Horror? Thanks.

John Tague

You are a genius brother!

Sylvain Van Guerin

Love your Post! you're so right on #4 You have to accept feedback's and expose your first draft of story and only take the notes that improves your script. This stage of modeling and again remodeling your story is wonderful and fun. It's this part that makes you improve your story. Just start by bei...

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Michael Mendershausen

On what page do you recommend that "opening kill"?

Peter Goldfinger

First five pages. It's like a teaser.

Michael Mendershausen

Thanks. Must it be connected to the story spine?

Judith Ann Mc Dowell

My four scripts, in the horror genre have been redone and are ready to be looked at. You give great advice. Thanks.

Peter Goldfinger

Wow! Never stop trying to sell it. If you want to hear how selling movies can go, listen to this... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=01l1WIC9mBohttps://www.youtube.com/watch.... Actually, everybody sho...

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Dennis Kitainik

You don't happen to be related to Auric, btw?

James Hoey

Excellent post, thank you for sharing all of this. We do all of these things, but it's nice to get affirmation that we're not being ego-maniacle when we hold hard on some things. For everyone arguing against this excellent list, I would just say this; write and sell your movie/show. You can make cha...

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Peter Goldfinger

Good points... though I would add that if you feel your script "looks fine..." it likely does not. You should think it's perfect... and let them tell you it isn't! When I work with a young writer and they argue my notes, all I can think is, "I don't wanna do this anymore..."

James Hoey

100% agree. "Looks fine" has never been acceptable to us, which is why we pushed so hard to get someone to read it to give us feedback. We desperately wanted it to be perfect, but we just could not pu...

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