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THE PROTECTOR
By Chanel Ashley
Rand is an alien, he wants to murder a serial killer, but his Starship father, also the captain, forbids it; they cannot intervene with the planet's internal affairs nor change natural history, but some rules are meant to be broken.
WARNING, some graphic material of a sexual nature and may offend.
THE PROTECTOR
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This is the second script I wrote some time ago, please forgive the rough edges - it's confronting and not for everybody - the language and sex scenes are quite strong and will potentially offend - YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED - this was deliberately provocative to acquire attention, no need to use words such as "depravity", I've already been told.
An alien and a serial killer could be double mumbo jumbo? http://www.savethecat.com/todays-blog/double-mumbo-jumbo-muddle
Interesting observation, Rutger, not certain I agree re double mumbo jumbo - the alien looks and acts like us and has a strong desire to wrong a right, not a difficult concept to absorb - he has the power and capacity to kill the serial killer, not to mention his omnipotent computer "protector" as his invisible companion - but rules forbid this action, his dilemma being whether he contravenes these rules with the consequences that follow - one always pays a price for their actions - thank you for the contact.
Get the story now Chanel, I concluded to hastily.
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