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After years of living on a desert commune, an estranged mother returns home to see her dying father and is confronted by the son she left behind.
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Hey Nick. That's great advice, especially about the second act midpoint. I'm gonna rework this a bit. Thanks!
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Hey Nick. That's great advice, especially about the second act midpoint. I'm gonna rework this a bit. Thanks!
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