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When an 18 year old boy taking care of his dying grandfather finds a box that grants materialistic desires, he learns the truth about it’s dark and violent history, causing a cult uproar focused at raising the demon god "Moloch."
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Added a slightly revised script
I like it! I was actually just thinking about revising the script a bit to shift the focus more towards suggesting that the box has physical consequences for using it whereas I tried to pin the grandfather's death on one of the cultists before. Thank you for the ideas!