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By James Austin McCormick

GENRE: Drama

An old man does so hate to make a fuss, even when someone's life is at stake


The story centers on an old couple. We never see the wife apart from the

back of her head as she sits in a chair. She never speaks either. It is

the old man who does the talking and as he does we realise he's

suffering from demntia. He's been a little worried about his wife

becuause she isn't eating but doesn't really want to bother anyone about

this. Gradually we realise something is very wrong here. When a woman

comes rushing through the door and into their living room (who we might

assume is their daughter)our suspicions are confirmed. As a script, Fuss

tries to be as subtle as possible whilst allowing the reader to work

out what is actually going on. (3 pages)

Nathaniel Baker

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