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MISCREATIONS
By Mike Meyerson

GENRE: Horror
LOGLINE:

A high school outcast, obsessed with monsters, tracks down a Nazi-era vampire that is terrorizing his town.


William Gunn

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William Gunn

A little too Buffy-ish? Perhaps expand the logline and fill in the synopsis with more details. What makes it stand out from every other story about Teens fighting Vampires? It has to have it's own Hook! Maybe the Kid's Autistic? Or the Vampire is the Richest Man in Town who everybody admires? Or the Town is in a Parallel Universe? Something Dammit!!!!!!! wgunn1953@hotmail.com

Mike Meyerson

updated...better?

Mike Meyerson

thanks for the feedback, I agree, it was too simple.

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