A little too Buffy-ish? Perhaps expand the logline and fill in the synopsis with more details. What makes it stand out from every other story about Teens fighting Vampires? It has to have it's own Hook! Maybe the Kid's Autistic? Or the Vampire is the Richest Man in Town who everybody admires? Or the Town is in a Parallel Universe? Something Dammit!!!!!!! wgunn1953@hotmail.com
Rated this logline
A little too Buffy-ish? Perhaps expand the logline and fill in the synopsis with more details. What makes it stand out from every other story about Teens fighting Vampires? It has to have it's own Hook! Maybe the Kid's Autistic? Or the Vampire is the Richest Man in Town who everybody admires? Or the Town is in a Parallel Universe? Something Dammit!!!!!!! wgunn1953@hotmail.com
updated...better?
thanks for the feedback, I agree, it was too simple.