rework with specific details of the people involved and how they are related to each other, give it some heart and take out the racial tone of it.

is the fact that they work in home repair significant to the film? Are they fighting the monster? Then connect not when a monster is unleashed but fight against a monster. "Limb-snatching?" Does the monster run up and grab your arm off leaving you fine? Limb-ripping? maybe: A Jewish mother and daughter fight against a hell-spawned anti-Semitic monster so that...