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A self-centered young guy suffers the consequences when he cruelly breaks up with his girlfriend over the phone.
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YOU GET WHAT YOU DESERVE sounds interesting, Jane Tumminello. I suggest adding the protagonist's goal to the logline.
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YOU GET WHAT YOU DESERVE sounds interesting, Jane Tumminello. I suggest adding the protagonist's goal to the logline.
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Thank you Maurice Vaughan for reviewing and commenting on my loglines. Very much appreciated it!
You're welcome, Jane.