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A screenwriter's chance encounter with a mysterious nineteen-year-old girl results in her telling him a story of love, lust, death, and spies, that is so fantastic it can't be real or so he thought.
SYNOPSIS:
WILLY ('30s) is a lonely screenwriter struggling to finish his latest script. On a
thundering rainy night in the mountains, he comes across a stranded hitchhiker,
ZOEY (19) and against his better judgment invites her to weather the storm at
his cabin.
The next morning he awakens to find that Zoey finished his script, with a better
ending than he could have written! In return, Zoey asks for Willy's help to write
her own script.
Her tale revolves around the action adventures of two 18-year-old girls attending
an upper-class London boarding school. They decide to leave school and go to
Spain, so they break into a British military officer's safe and steal thousands of
Euros and a Top Secret intelligence book. The book tells them how to escape
and evade capture.
Now the girls are running for their lives across Europe with James Bond-type
assassins quickly closing in. If the girls can only make it to Spain, they might be
safe. But they underestimated the resources of British Intelligence.
Before Zoey can finish her story, the FBI comes knocking on Willy's cabin door.
Zoey escapes and leaves a cryptic message for him to meet her in Amsterdam in
two weeks.
How much of her story was real? Willy doesn't know. He does know that if any
part of her story was real and he goes to Amsterdam, he probably won't come
back alive. But being a good writer, he must have an ending to Zoey's script.
He buys a ticket.
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