Robert DeVerger: In Saratoga Springs, Utah.

Sadaf Amini
Looking for Co_writer and producer for my original School-age Children’s TV show

Hello All, Im new to stage 32 and Im still figuring out how the whole platform works :) Im an animation director with 9 years of Production experience of children's TV shows by Disney Junior , Netflix, Dreamworks, Nickelodeon and other studios .I Recently I took a between seasons break to develop my...

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Maurice Vaughan

Also, Sadaf Amini, you might find a producer to work with in the Producing Lounge: https://www.stage32.com/lounge/producing...

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Robert DeVerger

Hello Sadaf, I would love to speak with you more about this opportunity. I am looking for something exactly like this.

Elvina Mwaura

Hi, Sadaf. My name's Elvina. I'm a screenwriter and would love to partner with you in writing for your project.

GET IT TOGETHER, TINA
GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

After another one-night stand and an epiphany, Tina is getting back together with her ex and now her two best friends must put their differences aside to destroy this relationship before it destroys them all.

Nate Rymer

Rated this logline

Marcos Fizzotti

Rated this logline

Tasha Lewis

Rated this logline

I need help finding a manager.

I am at a point in my writing "career" where I need a manager. I have been told by a few execs that this step is needed for me to start getting my foot in the door because I don't know anyone on the inside. I have emailed and called a large list of managers already and have not heard back from any o...

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Danny Manus

The question is also, are these execs telling you that you NEED a manager or that you are READY for a manager. Those are 2 diff things. How many scripts do you have ready to go? How many more ideas yo...

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Leonor LeRu

Either you will fine or you will be found the manager here sooner or later! Wish you all the best Robert!!! It will Happen for sure!

Kiril Maksimoski

The other day company mail came in and my firm is looking for a higher level supervisor, a clear promotion for me....with nine years there and a load of experience, I was still reluctant to apply...

Af...

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Alicia Sekhri
Offering (free) screenplay coverage/Feedback

Hey folks,

I need to read more screenplays so thought I'd combine it with something useful.

If you're looking for feedback on your story, logline, or in need of screenplay coverage, please comment on this post with your logline and link to the project. I can't provide coverage for everyone but I'll...

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Evelyne Gauthier

Hey Alicia. Maybe I would be due for some feedback. I'll probably ask for a logline review from Stage32, but right now, I'm struggling with my synopsis. Feedback on my logline and my synopsis would be nice, if that's possible for you. Can I send it to your email? Thanks! :)

Alicia Sekhri

Of course, feel free!

Surina Nel

I would love if you could do mine to. I'll send it to you via e-mail. MY e'-mail is surinanel1978@gmail.com. It's a lovely story, for animation, about a pony and his boy.

What do you do with conflicting critiques and reviews?

I received a feedback email from a script competition that I had entered and the email told me that I wouldn't advance in the competition because my script was missing x, had too much x, or needed more x. The particular script that I entered into the contest has been read by two major execs in the i...

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Robert DeVerger

Barry, The Blacklist scores /10 so I was very low on my score. Part of the issue was, the reviewer said my s riot was a drama, comedy but my script is purely a comedy. I emailed the support team and spoke to them about the issue, they are having the script reevaluated.

David Clarke Lambertson

I keep a feedback file for each of my scripts. It is separated into POSITIVE comments and NEGATIVE comments,

Positive comments generally do not help you improve a script. Of course, they are good for...

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Monica Mansy

Hi, Robert DeVerger congrats on completing your script and submitting for coverage! I know receiving conflicting notes can be confusing. I think one way to look at it is that part of the creative proc...

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How do I approach an agent?

I am in a position after much hard work that I can start looking for an agent and hopefully get my work in front of the right people. I don't know anyone in the industry so I'm going to have to do this the tried and true way of messaging, calling, and knocking on the doors of any possible agents, I...

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Phillip E. Hardy, "The Pro From Dover"

In another thread last week, I stated it's difficult for an unproduced screenwriter to find an agent that will rep your material. If you only have one script, it can be more difficult. However, if you...

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Robert DeVerger

Thank you very much, Phillip, for compiling that list. I have a few works, I can send out, I just need to find the right fit.

Phillip E. Hardy, "The Pro From Dover"

Robert: Glad to help.

Just wanted to say hello

Hello everyone, I am new to the screenwriting scene but very excited to get my work out there. I'm 39 and most of my professional career has been in the fitness and sports industry until recently moving over to SEO marketing and website specialization. I have always had an active imagination and wha...

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Alicia Sekhri

Welcome!

Debbie Croysdale

@Barry heh heh, yep Welcome to the Hotel California. Check out any time but never leave!

Monica Mansy

Welcome aboard, Robert! Congrats on writing three scripts; that's amazing! Stage 32 is a great place to grow in the craft and meet other creatives. I would definitely jump in the lounges (just like yo...

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What is your outline process?

When, I start working on a project, I will just start writing a story rather it makes sense or not and then I will dive into the weeds of the mess I've just written and start pulling elements that I like from there. I know that there isn't one specific way to outline a story or start to write one, b...

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Louisa Kendrick Burton

I'm not sure there is a one solution that fits everyone. I for one am not good at outlining, I've struggled with it a long time. And I've taken so many classes and webinars on the subject. It's just n...

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Lori Jones

I don't use an outline. I begin each new project when I have my characters and the overall situation in place. Then I ask three questions for each character; What do they want? Why can't they get it? What fear/personal lesson do they need to overcome to get the outcome they desire?

Jim Boston

Robert, once I come up with a logline, I don't want to continue the project until I've found six plot points...stages that get me from my story's beginning (for instance, a factory worker contemplates...

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Mista Martel
If you had the opportunity to write an episode for a current tv series, what it would it be?

That would be Star Trek: Discovery for me. I've always in enjoyed the Star Trek Franchise. Deep Space Nine being my favorite.

Jess Waters

Gentleman Jack, Lovecraft Country, or Russian Doll

Annaluisa De Socchieri

9-1-1 Lone Star. I want to dream big

Lee Krempel

Barry or Fargo.

What is your outline process?

I know that there isn't one hard rule of outlining a story, character arc etc, but I'm curious if anyone goes into writing as reckless as I? Of course a story always starts with an idea and then you must have at least 1 character, but after that, I just start writing. Most of my first drafts are so...

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Richard "RB" Botto

Hi Robert. I'm RB, Founder and CEO of Stage 32. As a screenwriter, producer, actor and filmmaker, I know first-hand the challenges all creatives face finding work, landing representation, launching projects, securing funding and simply making the connections that will make a difference in their careers. That's why I created Stage 32. Since our launch in September of 2011, the community has grown to 1,000,000+ members representing every country on the planet making Stage 32 the social network uniquely populated with the most creative people on Earth.

This is a network for you, built by you. Like...

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Amanda Toney

Hello Robert -

Welcome to the community! I'm Amanda Toney, the Managing Director at Stage 32. Since 2013 I've been proud to oversee Stage 32's Next Level Education, which provides you the most up-to-date tools necessary to become a better creative.

Over the years Stage 32 has worked with over 500 industry executives and professionals to teach online webinars, classes and intensive labs exclusively for you - our Stage 32 community. We bring you instructors who have worked directly on some of your favorite films, TV shows or theater productions to teach you in-the-trenches information that you w...

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