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A Cuban immigrant wins the lottery visa stakes and is catapulted to the US. As she tries to navigate through this "new normal" life she finds that at every turn, there is something she does not understand or someone who does not understand her!
SYNOPSIS:
Yumislaidys arrives in the US and tries to navigate through the new normal of her life. Yet, with every turn, there is something she does not understand or someone who does not understand her!
Carolina, I LOVE this premise! Your opening sentence is quite strong, but I think that finding a more streamlined version of this logline would be really helpful here.
I'd watch this in a heartbeat!
Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback.