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CHIMERICAL - THE KEY
By Robert I. McKeon
A beautiful young woman, her mother, and all of her great-grandmothers going back millennia hold The Key to something the whole world wants and will do anything to get. It is in their DNA; so, they must run, hide, fight and do everything in their power to protect it and stay alive.
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I want to know what is in her DNA. I think this detail is what makes your story different and stand out. You have the mystery and history, but I am left without the hook. A very interesting premise and a genre there needs to be more films in.