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BUSHWHACK

BUSHWHACK
By Agnieszka Baczkowska-Maśluszczak

GENRE: Science Fiction, Horror
LOGLINE:

After a rescue team lands on an alien forest planet, they fight for survival against carnivorous plants, trying to get home. (humorous elements)

BUSHWHACK

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Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Agnieszka. Unique concept.

How about this for a logline: "After a rescue team lands on an alien forest planet, they fight for survival against carnivorous plants as they try to get home." I don't know the story, so "they fight for survival against carnivorous plants as they try to get home" might not be right.

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Nate Rymer

Rated this logline

Agnieszka Baczkowska-Maśluszczak

Thanks for the advice Maurice, I changed it, just using less words, and it sounds better now. :-)

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Agnieszka Baczkowska-Maśluszczak. The logline sounds better. The "trying to get home" part sounds off though.

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