How about this for a logline: "After a rescue team lands on an alien forest planet, they fight for survival against carnivorous plants as they try to get home." I don't know the story, so "they fight for survival against carnivorous plants as they try to get home" might not be right.
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Hi, Agnieszka. Unique concept.
How about this for a logline: "After a rescue team lands on an alien forest planet, they fight for survival against carnivorous plants as they try to get home." I don't know the story, so "they fight for survival against carnivorous plants as they try to get home" might not be right.
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Thanks for the advice Maurice, I changed it, just using less words, and it sounds better now. :-)
You're welcome, Agnieszka Baczkowska-Maśluszczak. The logline sounds better. The "trying to get home" part sounds off though.