I like the concept, Demian Cuthbertson. I see the irony in it: An underachieving bachelor trying to help someone with their love life.

I think the logline needs more detail. I suggest adding the inciting incident and the stakes.

Thanks, extremely grateful for the feedback!

You're welcome, Demian Cuthbertson. This is kinda like a family version of "Hitch" (not "family version" as in the Family genre, but the bachelor and nephew are family).

This guy likes to claim he knows about things he doesn’t, and when he gets proven wrong he’ll attack people on a personal level. Anyone who follows or is acquainted with him should reconsider the type of person he actually is.