THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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STATE SCHOOL ROAD
By Amanda Michel
In a haunted institution a woman fights for her life and the souls of forgotten boys.
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Nice work with the logline so far, Amanda Michel. You have the setting, main character, the goal of the story, and stakes. What's the inciting incident? Do you have an adjective for the woman/main character?