I was expecting you would show at some point your character's face. it didn't happen. In my opinion it would be a much stronger piece if you would play on a contrast of close ups and a human face with emotions and reactions and wide angles. Editing and music were good. Story could be stronger. Keep climbing.
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I was expecting you would show at some point your character's face. it didn't happen. In my opinion it would be a much stronger piece if you would play on a contrast of close ups and a human face with emotions and reactions and wide angles. Editing and music were good. Story could be stronger. Keep climbing.
Nice work. Vitaly does make a good point however. Build on this!
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Good Luck Stan.