Hi everyone,
I’m a father of two who recently started writing scripts based on real experiences from my childhood. I just finished my first short film screenplay called Dear Me. It’s a personal story about childhood trauma, anger, and the process of healing as an adult.
I’m new to screenwriting and still learning the craft, so I would really appreciate any feedback from writers who would be willing to read it. I’m especially interested in thoughts on pacing, emotional impact, and whether the story connects.
If anyone is interested in reading it or giving notes, please let me know and I’d be happy to share the script.
Thank you all for taking the time to read this.
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Heyy Andrew, I appreciate your time writing about your human experience. I would love to see your script, and give my note and feedback ❤️
Interessante, eu acredito que as histórias da vida do Roterista, influencia muito no futuro, não é só no Roteiro, mas também em outros tipos de narrativas,, parabéns pela curta-metragem, gostaria de ler e dar meu feedback
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Kelvin Bernards João Pimentel https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aLtHVtvVPuWl4Dgk0kvv4Ezy-T-N5tpCAgkL...
Andrew Pacleb Obrigado por mandar este link do seu roteiro, estou lendo o roteiro, e eu pensei em te dar uma dica, tem um site chamado WriterDuet que ajuda na formatação de Roteiro e ele é grátis, ele não é tão bom quanto aplicativos pagos, mas é uma forma grátis que auxilia na formatação, eu uso ele pros meus roteiros!
João Pimentel Thanks for the suggestion, I really appreciate it. I’ll check out WriterDuet. I’m still learning a lot about screenplay formatting, so tools like that definitely help. Glad you’re taking the time to read the script and give feedback.