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A gripping journey an unreported story of a sunken ship in a remote corner's of the Malacca Straits.
Mission impossible not for Spartan and his elite. White Knights .Top Secret technology ,no way must get into the hands of a foreign power.
SYNOPSIS:
SYNOPSIS
The U.S.A. BASE PINE FOREST
Loins that roar out of the mist from an African jungle. Ego
the night sky five black long wheels based articulate truck
start their engines and leave the snowy iced gates of a base
somewhere in the forest of the US.
S.B.S Commander James Spartan, together with his beautiful
assistants, and a son he never knew existed, takes on the
impossible task of rescuing hostages while recovering unknown
technology. Pirates in SE Asia. An elite diving team known
as the White Knight where form by Commander James Spartan,
his involvement with top secrets assignments world wide
specializing, Radio Activity and Nuclear deep dive recoveree
with his team, a dangerous fame fatal, unscrupulous
antiquities dealer, and sunken ship action thriller.
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The Logline has potential and then the sentence structure breaks up at the end. The synopsis is formatted very strangely and both feature a number of typos. There's not much detail about the characters other than some very Tom Clancy-meets-James Bond beats about what they are rather than who they are