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THE WHITE KNIGHTS

THE WHITE KNIGHTS
By Steve Rouse

GENRE: Action, Adventure
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A gripping journey an unreported story of a sunken ship in a remote corner's of the Malacca Straits.
Mission impossible not for Spartan and his elite. White Knights .Top Secret technology ,no way must get into the hands of a foreign power.         

SYNOPSIS:

SYNOPSIS

The U.S.A. BASE PINE FOREST

Loins that roar out of the mist from an African jungle. Ego

the night sky five black long wheels based articulate truck

start their engines and leave the snowy iced gates of a base

somewhere in the forest of the US.

S.B.S Commander James Spartan, together with his beautiful

assistants, and a son he never knew existed, takes on the

impossible task of rescuing hostages while recovering unknown

technology. Pirates in SE Asia. An elite diving team known

as the White Knight where form by Commander James Spartan,

his involvement with top secrets assignments world wide

specializing, Radio Activity and Nuclear deep dive recoveree

with his team, a dangerous fame fatal, unscrupulous

antiquities dealer, and sunken ship action thriller.

Nathaniel Baker

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Reid Pickett

The Logline has potential and then the sentence structure breaks up at the end. The synopsis is formatted very strangely and both feature a number of typos. There's not much detail about the characters other than some very Tom Clancy-meets-James Bond beats about what they are rather than who they are

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