Screenwriting : Format question by John Iannucci

John Iannucci

Format question

While I finish up a rewrite on “Brother’s keeper” I am starting a new TV series. In it a number of people are switched. (Can’t believe I’m goin’ sci fi here) They are identical characters - played by the same character in different universes - with different qualities.

Example -

Bob, Joe, Bill are in universe A.

They switch with

With Brad, Mike and Phil who are identical (same actors) but different lives.

How do I write these characters after the switch.

i.e. Bob and Brad are the same (just random names now.)

After the switch is Bob written as Brad or BOB/BRAD which would make Brad BRAD/BOB

Answers I’ve gotten so far are too confusing for a reader.

Really confused. Any help.

Tony S.

From the "Screenwriters Bible":

BOB in A becomes in B either BRAD/BOB or BRAD (BOB).

Or add a line of action to explain it.

Dan MaxXx

Steal from writers. "Counterpart" by Justin Marks. Page 18, study how Marks easily describes two identical characters (played by the same actor).

http://thetelevisionpilot.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/01/Counterpart_1x0...

Doug Nelson

Watch Ted's film 'Leaves of Grass' to see how Ed Norton played both characters.

Nick Taylor

See if you can find a screenplay of "Cloud Atlas" because actors played multiple parts in different storylines.

Sam Borowski

You might want to check out the script for Face/Off.

John Iannucci

Thank you - sure I can find an answer in those suggestions.

Bill Costantini

I think you should write it with the production assistants and script coordinators in mind. They are the ones who ultimately become part of the "Accountability Chain" for continuity in every line in a script. So...I'd only put the character's name above the dialogue who is actually speaking it - "BOB" when he's speaking, and "BRAD" when he's speaking.

I'd also have a clear line in the narrative that explains the situation/situations when the switch/switches take place, like

UNIVERSE B

"In this universe, Bob is now BRAD."

Best fortunes in your creative endeavors, John!

Patricia Hylton Zell

Just a hint, using names that begin with the same letter will add a lot of confusion. In order to help your reader keep things straight, have every name begin with a different letter than the others and then make the names of the same character radically different. Example--instead of Bod/Brad, try something like Stan/Fredrick . Also, make the names uncommon to further help everyone keep who is who straight.

Tony S.

I hope so, you pain-in-the-ass John Iannucci.

John Iannucci

Yes I am Tony - yes I am.

Pat, those weren’t the names I was using. Just examples.

Tony S.

LOL

Roman BRuni

counterpart ?

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