Screenwriting : Page One: "Cast Away" (2000) by Maurice Vaughan

Maurice Vaughan

Page One: "Cast Away" (2000)

https://gointothestory.blcklst.com/page-one-cast-away-2000-f9dbe92f6c19

Page one of the script and the opening scene (video) are in this post. You can read the first page and compare it to the scene.

Doug Nelson

One of my favorite films. I don't really care much about the script but it sets a wonderful visual mood and I'm really moved by the huge foreshadowing that carried through from the opening bookend to the final bookend. It's an artistic masterpiece in a style seldom if ever seen in the current wave of Pablum style movies.

Maurice Vaughan

It's one of my favorite films also, Doug Nelson. How did you react when Wilson floated away?

Dan MaxXx

Tom Hanks was a guest recently on Bill Simmons podcast and he explained how he and the writer came up with the idea together, pitched it to studios and was rejected. Then Zemeckis liked the idea but there was no script, something like 10 years passed, then all three got together to make the movie and the studio bosses said yes, but only if Zemeckis directs another picture- basically forcing an Oscar winning Director to make 2 movies for 1 salary! I dont believe Tom Hanks is credited with co-writing Cast Away.

I have no idea who typed Cast Away screenwriting pages after they filmed. Hanks said they still had no script when they started filming.

Maurice Vaughan

Thanks for sharing that, Dan MaxXx. I didn't know that's how the movie came about. Even someone like Tom Hanks was rejected.

Maurice Vaughan

I read Halle Berry had a similar situation with "Bruised."

Doug Nelson

When Wilson floated away - that was a true screenwriter's moment. When things look as bleak as possible - things take a turn for the worse. Brilliant story showing.

Maurice Vaughan

It was a true screenwriter's moment/brilliant story showing, Doug Nelson. I thought they were both going to make it off the island.

Maurice Vaughan

Well, Wilson did make it off the island, but Tom Hank's character didn't get back home with him.

Robert Timsah

But, what happened to the ring Tom Hanks gave Helen Hunt?

Maurice Vaughan

It's been years since I've seen the movie, Robert Timsah. I don't remember the ring.

Robert Timsah

A goofy mockumentary short I wrote featured Cast Away, and you posting this made me chuckle. https://robert-timsah.com/feedback-addiction/

Maurice Vaughan

"Feedback Addiction" was humorous, Robert Timsah. I enjoyed reading it. Unique idea. One feedback: I think the ending should be different. It feels like the story is incomplete. Maybe she gets help for her addiction.

Florin Şumălan

Nice website. I think it's a good idea this "Page One" thing.

You can learn some things by reading a part of the script, then watching that part from the movie.

Maurice Vaughan

You're right, Florin Şumălan. By seeing what was included and what wasn't included, It can help you not overwrite scripts.

Florin Şumălan

Also you can see how the director approached the scene, what camera moves and angles he used, how the editing was done...

Maurice Vaughan

You're right, Florin Şumălan.

Florin Şumălan

Anyway, thank you for posting this, Maurice Vaughan !

Robert Timsah

Thanks, Maurice, for giving it a read. Funny thing is Cast Away is one of my favorite films, lol. But if someone is ever interested in shooting Feedback Addiction, or I do it myself, I might re-examine the ending. Thanks again and good luck with your writing.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Robert Timsah. The script reminds me of "Stranger Than Fiction."

James Welday

Simply love Cast Away, as I feel it's a truly underappreciated piece of filmmaking.

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