Three neurotic hitmen, each with a troubled past, are secretly hired to assassinate one another as their final job reveals only one will survive.
Screenwriting : Three of a kind by Scott Phillips
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Hey Scott, don't forget to post this on your profile so you can get feedback!
Nice work.
Thanks!
Thanks Mason! I threw some commas in there for you.
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Don't know what your intent is but it sounds like a good comedic romp to me.
To me with respect it feels egregiously 20th-century.
What about three enthusiastic life-coaches who are promised enlightenment by a voluptuous yoga goddess if they can counsel each other to only be vegan, but they all love sushi and they're organic farmers who are social influencers?
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That does sound funny Daniel lol. Egregiously so.
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Kind of a last man standing story? What happens if there's a survivor? Or is that the twist?
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Scott Phillips that's what's up bro, I appreciate you and those ideas are yours for free lol
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Men not man, I think.
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Jay spotted it. I’m liking Stage32 thanks!
Just a suggestion.
I would drop the troubled past. It is implied in a way. That gives you a little more room for a story element.
This may not be your story.
Upon learning they have been sent to kill each other three hitmen decide to take revenge on their old boss and slip off into retirement but their replacements are more ruthless than imagined.
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Good set-up but finish with a taster of how it all unravels. Nice work.
Thanks Bob and Ewan. I added a little dash of seasoning at the end there.
Hi Scott, I DM'd you ...
Spot on, Scott...I'd like to read that...
A bit tighter perhaps.
A hitman on his final job finds out that three assassins have been put up against each other, while their bosses bet big against him they accordingly serve the opponents with huge advantages.