Screenwriting : Opinion/Suggestion about screenplay title. by Conor Matthews

Conor Matthews

Opinion/Suggestion about screenplay title.

Hi all.

I'm currently writing a feature screenplay about Charlie Chaplin and the production of The Great Dictator (I'm going for a "aging artist's last hoorah"). Think "Hitchcock" (2012) meets "Trumbo" (2015). It's going well but I can't settle of a title. The working title is currently "The Jewish Barber" (the name of the main character in the film), but I don't like it. The other ideas I've had (and disliked) include;

The Tramp Speaks

The Tramp's Speech

Hynkel V Hitler/Tramp V Hitler

The Great Dictator/Greatest Dictator

Hail Hynkel

I just can't decide on anything. In terms of tone I'm going for a biopic drama with some comedic moments. It's a fascinating piece of history, not just in Hollywood but in America and the world. I want to do it fully justice.

Any suggestions would be appreciated. Thank you.

Kiril Maksimoski

You'll be the judge of that, but here's a little anecdote that might inspire you...when they said to Chaplin that Hitler actually saw the movie...twice, Chaplin responded I'd give all of my fortune to know his impressions...

Dan MaxXx

"Charlie Chaplin and the production of The Great Dictator" by Conor Matthews.

Eoin O'Sullivan

The Fascist and the Tramp

E Langley

CHAPLIN AND DER FUHRER.

Dane Johnson

As the great Frances Marion once wrote, fashions in titles change. But her advice still seems valid today: “The audience reacts definitely to titles. First of all, it wants titles that it can understand. . . . There is more significance than humor in the fact that many persons assumed that The Doll’s House was a picture for ‘the kiddies,’ that Sky Pilot dealt with aviation, the Admirable Crichton with the Navy, and that The Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse was a Western. Not only must titles by easily understandable, but they also must be easy to pronounce. . . . Misleading and tricky titles, promising something the picture does not give, are annoying.”

Cara Rogers

I say "Hail Hynkel." Grabs attention, says much with little wording. Alliteration is always great.

Phillip E. Hardy, "The Pro From Dover"

Conor: I go for something more subtle. I'd write down a lot of options.

Conor Matthews

Thank you everyone for the suggestions :)

Larry Guzman

FYI: The name "Charlie Chaplin" and a lot of other IP associated with him is still protected by copyright.

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