Pitch Feedback:
"Hell at 30 Below is a well-crafted pitch. The characters are set up well, the story is relatable as many people go through similar struggles. The plot keeps moving forward to an ending that is satisfying. The story has an indie film feel to it. This is a character study on mental illness and emotional distress prior to when it was accepted to speak about it. The market here would be for a female-centric production company to lend a voice and authenticity to the project." Producer Kelly Hayes.
www.angelfire.com/film2/kinsman
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When you post supposedly pitch feedback you are going want to also post who provided the feedback, otherwise, it seems like you just made it up. Also a picture of a school is rather boring- best of luck
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My Stage32 pitch feedback is from Producer Kelly Hayes, in Los Angeles, CA. If you would have checked out my link to HELL AT 30 BELOW, you would have known it's not a boring picture of a school. I wish! Best of luck to you, too.
Log Line: "During the winter of 1972, before there were shelters and support for women in crisis, an emotionally broken, injured, young woman commits herself to a mental hospital, to escape her abusive husband."
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Hey Karen Kinsman! That's AWESOME! Congrats on the great feedback! The story sounds really interesting. If you'd like more recommendations on who to submit to, shoot me an email at success@stage32.com :)
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Thank you, Emily! Will do!
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Karen, congratulations on the positive feedback...and here's wishing you more of the VERY BEST!
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Thank you, Jim, and wishing you the VERY BEST, too! :)