Hi, I reworked my logline and synopsis, so thought I'd share it here for feedback. Appreciate you reading it! https://www.stage32.com/profile/1100326/Screenplay/Cuernavaca
Screenwriting : Posted my logline & synopsis by Eliot Galán
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Thanks for posting Eliot Galán ! I'm excited to take a look.
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Eliot, well done on presenting the stakes in both the logline and the synopsis.
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"and that's the good news." very good hook there!
Thanks everyone! Pat Alexander thanks, I also had the idea to change it to "and that was a good day." Not sure which I like better.
Very nice.
A teenager, robbed from his relationship with dad is by his mother sent to live with him in a high crime neighborhood, and there ends the good news.