I'm finishing off a new draft of a pilot episode and I need some quick feedback/notes on the opening scenes. We're talking 12 pages.
I'd be more than happy to do this on a mutual note-sharing basis if anyone would be up for a short read over the weekend.
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Hi Michael! I can read it.
Thanks Oleg - that's much appreciated - I'll message you and do let me know if I can helpfully read something of yours
anyone else up for sharing opening scenes for some mutual feedback?
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I'd be happy to and I'd love feedback for a swap too!
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thanks Libby - I've submitted a network request and we can then share email addresses so we can send one another attachments
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Hi! I'd love to join the mutual exchange, too
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I am also available to exchange feedback on your drafts. I have only five years screenwriting, three scripts in constant rewrites and three in first draft; nothing sold. My focus has been features and pilots, mostly adventure and dramedy. Happy to offer my insights.
Thanks so much Cole Potter - I'll send you a message with a link to the episode now - it's really just the opening scenes - first 12 pages - I'm keen to get feedback on but if you fancy reading on, please do - and do send me something of your own
and Cole Potter gave me _invaluable_ reader responses - all proves how helpful it is getting peer reviewers to look over screenplays in the course of making them ready for targeted exec pitches...